Friday, March 25, 2011

March 25, 2011 BTB Somethng new from something written

Poem removed for publication

7 comments:

  1. I think this process did your work justice. This seems right... nothing extra, nothing missing.

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  2. I agree with Kim. Well done, with a positive message to inspire. Thank you.

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  3. I don't know what the original looked like...but doubt it was better than this. Good job, Vb

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  4. More of a pray than a poem but that makes it more special in the end

    www.thequietone.net

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  5. It's hard to imagine what more you could have said. What a lovely prayer.

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